From ea1df8fdbeb5b08542bb85cf1fed0727dc444655 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Holden Rohrer
Date: Wed, 20 May 2020 00:49:00 -0400
Subject: the 47 and a half minute version (w/ makefile)
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jones-la/tttc-dead.tex | 4 ++--
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index bb9d22c..b86e3eb 100644
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@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
\header
\title{Rhetorical Essay on {\it The Things They Carried}}
-% Rhetorical Analysis in __ minutes
+% Rhetorical Analysis in 47 and a half minutes
Tim O'Brien's {\it The Things They Carried} is only topically about the
Vietnam War. Throughout the book, he often tells stories directly, but
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ equivocation stories in general are a sort of window past the horror
that is war and the human condition.
But O'Brien doesn't imply that all stories are tonally fanciful like
-his with Linda. Because even those in this book aren't; his war stories
+his with Linda. Because not even all in this book are; his war stories
about Lemon and Lavender are sense horrific and a type of pointless
that O'Brien talks about in {\it How to Tell a True War Story}. He does
imply that, at their core, every story has this wonderful ability. In
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