From b2226a791e1b9c3f174cde519f699454e520aef4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Holden Rohrer Date: Sat, 22 Aug 2020 23:11:05 -0400 Subject: revised the script --- markley/03_first_week_video | 36 +++++++++++++++++------------------- 1 file changed, 17 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-) (limited to 'markley/03_first_week_video') diff --git a/markley/03_first_week_video b/markley/03_first_week_video index 3afe089..8fa5b9c 100644 --- a/markley/03_first_week_video +++ b/markley/03_first_week_video @@ -30,24 +30,22 @@ My Presentation ---------- Hi, I'm Holden Rohrer. -I'm a Dual Enrollment student at Tech from Centennial High School in -Roswell, Georgia. -I'm looking forward to taking Dr Markley's English 1102 with a focus on -the development of Medicine and Medical Instrumentation. +I'm a Dual Enrollment student at Georgia Tech from Centennial High +School in Roswell, Georgia. +This year, I'm looking forward to taking Dr Markley's English 1102 +focused on Medicine and Medical Instrumentation. -In this course, I expect to use each of the WOVEN methods, and I believe -that my least developed skillset will be visual communication. -While I can develop my ideas thoroughly in longer form written or oral -communication, I rarely approach with conciseness as a primary goal. -This harms my visual communication most because images, videos, or -design restrict the total information that can be conveyed at the risk -it becomes textual [image], and it often requires equal or greater -design effort than developing ideas themselves. -Since this work often appears tangential, I typically limit effort here, -which results in presentation-worthy but boring black-and-white or -white-and-black imagery. +I expect to utilise each of the WOVEN methods, but I believe I will +struggle most with visual communication. +While I can develop my ideas exhaustively in long form written or oral +communication, I often have trouble compressing ideas. +This is clearest in visual communication most because images' or videos' +visual design permit little explicit information. +This type of quality is also less tangible, so I've been guilty of +ignoring it, deferring to content instead. +This results in presentationworthy but boring templated or +black-and-white visuals. -This year, I hope to use the visual flexibility of the Wordpress reading -journal's basic design and the visual content of individual posts to -improve my design eye by deliberately focusing on how it appears at -first glance. +This year, I plan to deliberately focus on the visual flexibility of the +Wordpress reading journal's design and content to improve my sense for +how readers view it, at first glance and while using it. -- cgit