From 305f1939d31e28fcf59f0a9334600773b5974601 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Holden Rohrer <hr@hrhr.dev>
Date: Sat, 10 Oct 2020 12:59:44 -0400
Subject: minor essaytwo revise

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 markley/essaytwo.tex | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'markley/essaytwo.tex')

diff --git a/markley/essaytwo.tex b/markley/essaytwo.tex
index b6e433c..3ab25c6 100644
--- a/markley/essaytwo.tex
+++ b/markley/essaytwo.tex
@@ -119,9 +119,9 @@ contemporaries.
 
 Nearly all researchers exhibit some degree of this ``expediency ethic,''
 which is natural but frightening.
-It means that the more remote the power structure, the more likely it is
-to be flouted---internal review of a field or soft social barriers don't
-cut it.
+It means that the more remote external enforcement is, the more likely
+it is to be violated---internal review of a field or soft social
+barriers don't cut it.
 For researchers to universally follow ethical guidelines, they need to
 be codified and enforced because experimenters won't do it themselves.
 
-- 
cgit 

