the 47 and a half minute version (w/ makefile)

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diff --git a/Makefile b/Makefile
index bce4da4..1e2773d 100644
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@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 .POSIX:
 .SUFFIXES: .tex .pdf
-PDFS = examples/mla8.pdf examples/notes.pdf examples/terms.pdf gathing-eng/module-career.pdf model-un/research-guide.pdf tech-math/comb/hw1.pdf tech-math/comb/hw3.pdf tech-math/comb/hw4.pdf tech-math/comb/hw5.pdf tech-math/comb/hw6.pdf tech-math/comb/ws1.pdf tech-math/comb/ws2.pdf tech-math/comb/ws3.pdf tech-math/comb/ws4.pdf tech-math/comb/ws5.pdf tech-math/comb/ws6.pdf  tech-math/de/hw1.pdf tech-math/de/hw2.pdf tech-math/de/hw4.pdf tech-math/lect-notes.pdf tech-math/reflection.pdf  wroblewski-world/dbq.pdf wroblewski-world/history-six-glasses.pdf wroblewski-world/outlines/unit1.pdf wroblewski-world/outlines/unit4.pdf wroblewski-world/outlines/unit3.pdf wroblewski-world/outlines/unit2.pdf wroblewski-world/reading-notes/compile.pdf wroblewski-world/religion-comp.pdf  jones-la/heathcliff-essay.pdf jones-la/zinsser/annotations.pdf jones-la/zinsser/essay.rough.pdf jones-la/zinsser/essay.pdf jones-la/vance/annotations.pdf jones-la/vance/essay.rough.pdf jones-la/vance/essay.edit.pdf jones-la/vance/essay.pdf jones-la/quick1.pdf jones-la/letter.pdf jones-la/wiesenthal.pdf jones-la/persuas.pdf jones-la/shoot.pdf jones-la/quick6.pdf jones-la/paret.pdf jones-la/gatsby-proj.pdf jones-la/rhetorical3.pdf jones-la/reflection.pdf jones-la/rules.pdf jones-la/quick5.pdf jones-la/synth.pdf jones-la/song-tttc.pdf jones-la/tttc-true.pdf ap-physics1-exam/q2.pdf
+PDFS = examples/mla8.pdf examples/notes.pdf examples/terms.pdf gathing-eng/module-career.pdf model-un/research-guide.pdf tech-math/comb/hw1.pdf tech-math/comb/hw3.pdf tech-math/comb/hw4.pdf tech-math/comb/hw5.pdf tech-math/comb/hw6.pdf tech-math/comb/ws1.pdf tech-math/comb/ws2.pdf tech-math/comb/ws3.pdf tech-math/comb/ws4.pdf tech-math/comb/ws5.pdf tech-math/comb/ws6.pdf  tech-math/de/hw1.pdf tech-math/de/hw2.pdf tech-math/de/hw4.pdf tech-math/lect-notes.pdf tech-math/reflection.pdf  wroblewski-world/dbq.pdf wroblewski-world/history-six-glasses.pdf wroblewski-world/outlines/unit1.pdf wroblewski-world/outlines/unit4.pdf wroblewski-world/outlines/unit3.pdf wroblewski-world/outlines/unit2.pdf wroblewski-world/reading-notes/compile.pdf wroblewski-world/religion-comp.pdf  jones-la/heathcliff-essay.pdf jones-la/zinsser/annotations.pdf jones-la/zinsser/essay.rough.pdf jones-la/zinsser/essay.pdf jones-la/vance/annotations.pdf jones-la/vance/essay.rough.pdf jones-la/vance/essay.edit.pdf jones-la/vance/essay.pdf jones-la/quick1.pdf jones-la/letter.pdf jones-la/wiesenthal.pdf jones-la/persuas.pdf jones-la/shoot.pdf jones-la/quick6.pdf jones-la/paret.pdf jones-la/gatsby-proj.pdf jones-la/rhetorical3.pdf jones-la/reflection.pdf jones-la/rules.pdf jones-la/quick5.pdf jones-la/synth.pdf jones-la/song-tttc.pdf jones-la/tttc-true.pdf ap-physics1-exam/q2.pdf jones-la/tttc-dead.pdf
 all: $(PDFS)
 .tex.pdf:
 	pdftex --jobname $* $<
@@ -64,6 +64,7 @@ jones-la/quick5.pdf: jones-la/quick5.tex
 jones-la/synth.pdf: jones-la/synth.tex
 jones-la/song-tttc.pdf: jones-la/song-tttc.tex
 jones-la/tttc-true.pdf: jones-la/tttc-true.tex
+jones-la/tttc-dead.pdf: jones-la/tttc-dead.tex
 
 ap-physics1-exam/q2.pdf: ap-physics1-exam/q2.tex
 
diff --git a/jones-la/tttc-dead.tex b/jones-la/tttc-dead.tex
index bb9d22c..b86e3eb 100644
--- a/jones-la/tttc-dead.tex
+++ b/jones-la/tttc-dead.tex
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
 \header
 \title{Rhetorical Essay on {\it The Things They Carried}}
-% Rhetorical Analysis in __ minutes
+% Rhetorical Analysis in 47 and a half minutes
 
 Tim O'Brien's {\it The Things They Carried} is only topically about the
 Vietnam War. Throughout the book, he often tells stories directly, but
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ equivocation stories in general are a sort of window past the horror
 that is war and the human condition.
 
 But O'Brien doesn't imply that all stories are tonally fanciful like 
-his with Linda. Because even those in this book aren't; his war stories 
+his with Linda. Because not even all in this book are; his war stories 
 about Lemon and Lavender are sense horrific and a type of pointless 
 that O'Brien talks about in {\it How to Tell a True War Story}. He does 
 imply that, at their core, every story has this wonderful ability. In