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| author | Holden Rohrer <hdawg7797@yahoo.com> | 2019-08-12 01:40:04 -0400 |
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| committer | Holden Rohrer <hdawg7797@yahoo.com> | 2019-08-12 01:40:04 -0400 |
| commit | 26391848f945173b6fc07c7b7c78a6a2788438e4 (patch) | |
| tree | 5625bf0df45acf4f0122b24325753ba307eedb5d | |
| parent | 90c4bf5dc7369c0afd0551af7400975584b062e9 (diff) | |
essay edits
| -rw-r--r-- | jones-la/zinsser-essay.rough.tex | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | jones-la/zinsser-essay.tex | 5 |
2 files changed, 6 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/jones-la/zinsser-essay.rough.tex b/jones-la/zinsser-essay.rough.tex index 7dc6a67..0253930 100644 --- a/jones-la/zinsser-essay.rough.tex +++ b/jones-la/zinsser-essay.rough.tex @@ -50,7 +50,9 @@ And this method works, focusing on personal style instead of on hiding behind a %clutter All of these issues can be reduced to the one atom of writing: problems. Writing is an analytical process, so the easiest and best way to fit it into my cognition is to recognize it as what it is: a big problem that can be broken down into smaller problems. This also allows active learning to be recognized as practice. ``Whatever it is, it has to be confronted and solved'' \zincite{49}. But therein lies the utility of recognizing problems. %does this fit my style? -They can be solved, and solutions can be learned in two ways: reading other people's good writing, and writing well myself. +They can be solved, and solutions can be learned in two ways: reading other people's good writing, and writing well myself. %conclusion doesn't leave people thinking +%Problems. Maybe this can become a body paragraph, or put this theme more into other paragraphs? + %Make statements of qualities clearer \biblio diff --git a/jones-la/zinsser-essay.tex b/jones-la/zinsser-essay.tex index 56f0048..0253930 100644 --- a/jones-la/zinsser-essay.tex +++ b/jones-la/zinsser-essay.tex @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ -\input mla8.tex %must be run from root directory \input mla8.tex @@ -51,7 +50,9 @@ And this method works, focusing on personal style instead of on hiding behind a %clutter All of these issues can be reduced to the one atom of writing: problems. Writing is an analytical process, so the easiest and best way to fit it into my cognition is to recognize it as what it is: a big problem that can be broken down into smaller problems. This also allows active learning to be recognized as practice. ``Whatever it is, it has to be confronted and solved'' \zincite{49}. But therein lies the utility of recognizing problems. %does this fit my style? -They can be solved, and solutions can be learned in two ways: reading other people's good writing, and writing well myself. +They can be solved, and solutions can be learned in two ways: reading other people's good writing, and writing well myself. %conclusion doesn't leave people thinking +%Problems. Maybe this can become a body paragraph, or put this theme more into other paragraphs? + %Make statements of qualities clearer \biblio |